lunes, 19 de agosto de 2013

Personal Statement

I would like to take part of this program because I would like to visit Canada and meet people of other countries but mainly I wolud like to improve my english.

I am mexican and I think that I am a friendly and sociable person so I would like to talk with other people and show them about my culture, also I would ask them abour their culture and both could learn something new.

I have been playing football for more than 10 years so I would like to share my experiences in this sport I have played in USA and I think it would be a would experience to share with other participants.
I really want to imrpove my english because I think is the most important language in the world; also I would like to make some activities during the trip like practice snowboard, visit the Niagara Falls or some activities along the city.

I really hope to take part of this program because I really want to learn a lot.

2 comentarios:

  1. You sound like a good candidate for the program.
    Pay attention to these:
    Spelling: wolud/ abour / imrpove
    Capital letters for nationalities. E.g. Mexican
    Grammar: when you talk about activities the verbs need the gerund form. E.g. I like reading. Check this: " practice snowboard, visit the Niagara Falls"

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  2. About this text I think that I have to be more careful about my spelling because I had some mistakes, so I need to remove them to improve my writing. Also I need to use capital letters when it is needed beucause sometimes I forget them.

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